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Temptress by Rt-001 Temptress by Rt-001
Charlotte standing by a bon fire on a nighttime beach


*o* Sweet Jesus, I went all out with this one, and learned a lot on the way :)
I'm really proud of it ;u;

Le Credits:
:iconraiira:and:iconxxmteexx: for helping by offering advice

:iconsolsticeholt: for providing a useful brush for clouds :)

This Texture: [link] by :icondesideriasp-stock:

These tutorials (even if I still may have gotten them wrong, they still helped) [link] and [link]
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Critique by Raiira Jan 5, 2013, 2:35:35 AM
So, we meet again ms.shark.

As I mentioned on the other drawing of yours; I really like the face and how you make the expression work with the body. It gives of a strong feeling of presence in the drawing, and once again, I'm impressed. You are improving so fast, and this is one of my favorites from you so far!
The body looks really nice, and I kinda feel like we've caught her while she was dancing. You've done a good job on it. Your anatomy gets better and better!
I really like the background and the fire too, and the shading/light compliments it really well. It's easy to see that you took your time with this one, and it really paied off!

What I think could need a mit more improvement is the tail. Like I said on the other drawing; the tail is too high on her back. Try to lower it.
Her bra could also need some work. It make her look a little flatchested because you've drawn in like a triangle instead of shaping it after her breast. I decided to use Soot's picture as an example on how to do it: [link]
And last, the bellybutton. I think it's too low, and that you should try to draw it higher (not much, but a little).

And as I've mentioned countless of times before. Never give up on the good work you are doing. I enjoy looking at your art!
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CheesebreadUnicorn Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
Zombie-CollegeBoy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Shookso Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The lighting on this is great! EVERYWHERE! I like the glowing eye and the color the fire casts. Really great job. :D
RottenNails Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
she's hot
Arcad3Fire Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
you just keep improving and improving it looks SO cool!
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
What are the tutorials of? I remember you saying something about some tuts when you were helping me.
Rt-001 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The tutorial are about drawing fire and water in Sai :)
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I took a look at the fire tutorial... Hoooolleeeeee crap!! That is a fantastic fire making tutorial! It's so simple!!
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The picture looks really good by the way :meow:
Snowy-kun Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
She's so pretty c:
alinoravanity Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
!!! :D Charlotte!! *huggled the picture* You're my favorite.
Russianky Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
You did include fire :D adds a nice touch.
xXMTeeXx Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This turned out really lovely Rob :)
You did a great job :heart:
Lovely pose too BTW ^^
Sorry I couldn't stay too long on the stream :(
Rt-001 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's ok, but thank you for your help ;u;
Cgartist18 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she's teasing any guys near the bon fire
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December 31, 2012
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